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I dislike testing,although I try to do well,so I will not fail.
-Deja Davis
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Snow is falling downLike roses hatching the groundThat's coming to town
Swimming in the poolis refreshing fun and coolwatching all the boys
-Keariney Minor
Motivation/Haiku
Following othersdoesn’t make you cool eventhough it feels alright.
-Ja’keh Harris
I like the rhyme scheme of the poems by the young ladies that were before me.
– I like how Keariney and Michele/Ramier are rhyming and how they both have a kind of girly Haiku poem. I also like how Jakeh has an unrhyming; but, unique poem.
As the rain falls,the wind blows, I hear the thunderStorm coming inside
I like how Deja and Ja'keh word their poems, it has a good flow. Ramire and keariney have a good rhythm, and good wording.
I can see the tree,It is brown and has green leavesIt is very old. -Tyanna Warren
My body is niceI think you should take a lookbecause yours is too
-Brandi Hill
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Ja'keh I like your haiku a lot it tells the truth
playing in the fieldon the swings and see-sawyou hear laughter.-Rougui Barry
I like how Brandi and keariney wrote with rhythm.
Comments
16 responses to “Haiku”
I dislike testing,
although I try to do well,
so I will not fail.
-Deja Davis
thanks
Snow is falling down
Like roses hatching the ground
That's coming to town
Swimming in the pool
is refreshing fun and cool
watching all the boys
-Keariney Minor
Motivation/Haiku
Following others
doesn’t make you cool even
though it feels alright.
-Ja’keh Harris
I like the rhyme scheme of the poems by the young ladies that were before me.
– I like how Keariney and Michele/Ramier are rhyming and how they both have a kind of girly Haiku poem. I also like how Jakeh has an unrhyming; but, unique poem.
As the rain falls,the
wind blows, I hear the thunder
Storm coming inside
I like how Deja and Ja'keh word their poems, it has a good flow. Ramire and keariney have a good rhythm, and good wording.
I can see the tree,
It is brown and has green leaves
It is very old.
-Tyanna Warren
My body is nice
I think you should take a look
because yours is too
-Brandi Hill
This comment has been removed by the author.
Ja'keh I like your haiku a lot it tells the truth
This comment has been removed by the author.
playing in the field
on the swings and see-saw
you hear laughter.
-Rougui Barry
I like how Brandi and keariney wrote with rhythm.