April 20, 2011 // Literacy
I dislike testing,although I try to do well,so I will not fail.
Snow is falling downLike roses hatching the groundThat's coming to town
Swimming in the poolis refreshing fun and coolwatching all the boys
Following othersdoesn’t make you cool eventhough it feels alright.
I like the rhyme scheme of the poems by the young ladies that were before me.
- I like how Keariney and Michele/Ramier are rhyming and how they both have a kind of girly Haiku poem. I also like how Jakeh has an unrhyming; but, unique poem.
As the rain falls,the wind blows, I hear the thunderStorm coming inside
I like how Deja and Ja'keh word their poems, it has a good flow. Ramire and keariney have a good rhythm, and good wording.
I can see the tree,It is brown and has green leavesIt is very old. -Tyanna Warren
My body is niceI think you should take a lookbecause yours is too
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Ja'keh I like your haiku a lot it tells the truth
playing in the fieldon the swings and see-sawyou hear laughter.-Rougui Barry
I like how Brandi and keariney wrote with rhythm.
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