Haiku

April 20, 2011 // Literacy

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  1. Deja Davis says: April 20, 2011

    I dislike testing,
    although I try to do well,
    so I will not fail.

    -Deja Davis

  2. Jeanine Jones says: April 20, 2011

    thanks

  3. Michele says: April 21, 2011

    Snow is falling down
    Like roses hatching the ground
    That's coming to town

  4. keariney says: April 21, 2011

    Swimming in the pool
    is refreshing fun and cool
    watching all the boys

    -Keariney Minor

  5. Ja'Keh Harris Book Review says: April 21, 2011

    Motivation/Haiku

    Following others
    doesn’t make you cool even
    though it feels alright.

    -Ja’keh Harris

  6. Ja'Keh Harris Book Review says: April 21, 2011

    I like the rhyme scheme of the poems by the young ladies that were before me.

  7. Deja Davis says: April 21, 2011

    - I like how Keariney and Michele/Ramier are rhyming and how they both have a kind of girly Haiku poem. I also like how Jakeh has an unrhyming; but, unique poem.

  8. Jessica says: April 21, 2011

    As the rain falls,the
    wind blows, I hear the thunder
    Storm coming inside

  9. Jessica says: April 21, 2011

    I like how Deja and Ja'keh word their poems, it has a good flow. Ramire and keariney have a good rhythm, and good wording.

  10. Tyanna says: April 21, 2011

    I can see the tree,
    It is brown and has green leaves
    It is very old.
    -Tyanna Warren

  11. Brandi says: April 21, 2011

    My body is nice
    I think you should take a look
    because yours is too

    -Brandi Hill

  12. b.rougui says: April 21, 2011

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  13. Brandi says: April 21, 2011

    Ja'keh I like your haiku a lot it tells the truth

  14. b.rougui says: April 21, 2011

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  15. rougui barry says: April 22, 2011

    playing in the field
    on the swings and see-saw
    you hear laughter.
    -Rougui Barry

  16. rougui barry says: April 22, 2011

    I like how Brandi and keariney wrote with rhythm.

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