Haiku

16 thoughts on “Haiku”

1. I dislike testing,
   although I try to do well,
   so I will not fail.

   -Deja Davis

2. thanks

3. Snow is falling down
   Like roses hatching the ground
   That's coming to town

4. Swimming in the pool
   is refreshing fun and cool
   watching all the boys

   -Keariney Minor

5. Motivation/Haiku

   Following others
   doesn’t make you cool even
   though it feels alright.

   -Ja’keh Harris

6. I like the rhyme scheme of the poems by the young ladies that were before me.

7. – I like how Keariney and Michele/Ramier are rhyming and how they both have a kind of girly Haiku poem. I also like how Jakeh has an unrhyming; but, unique poem.

8. As the rain falls,the
   wind blows, I hear the thunder
   Storm coming inside

9. I like how Deja and Ja'keh word their poems, it has a good flow. Ramire and keariney have a good rhythm, and good wording.

10. I can see the tree,
    It is brown and has green leaves
    It is very old.
    -Tyanna Warren

11. My body is nice
    I think you should take a look
    because yours is too

    -Brandi Hill

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13. Ja'keh I like your haiku a lot it tells the truth

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15. playing in the field
    on the swings and see-saw
    you hear laughter.
    -Rougui Barry

16. I like how Brandi and keariney wrote with rhythm.

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